You play around all day
Not listening to what I say
Where you’re sick I have to pay
Scared you will go away
Why are you so carefree?
Unlike you I cannot drink coffee
Everytime see you at the tree
Always going there to pee
Scold you then give me cute face
Like I saw one doll at Lovely Lace
That kept singing Amazing Grace
Wait one day I go get Mace… then you’ll know
I say it’s too late to apologize…..
It’s too late….
I say it’s too late to apologize…..
It’s too late…..
ps : Written by Daniel for those that missed their past and present. You know what I meant.
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hollla daniel! my, that was very colloquial and personal. prolly to someone close?
though it made me wonder who in particular u are referring to. Quoting yr line 7 & 8, i would immediately think of an animal – a pet. But on line 6, it bamboozled me as animals absolutely do not consume such a beverage. =)
hmm.. very enigmatic then.
ps. It’s nice to see that someone else here also does poetry. *high5*
Scold you then give me cute face
Like I saw one doll at Lovely Lace <– why not change to “Like the doll I saw in Lovely Lace”
Hmm…
I dont sense any sadness in this poem (although u said this is sad poetry). What I felt is anger, confusion and … well, it’s better not to say here. Hoho~
Anyway, you’re scolding Singa izit? If you don’t want Singa, come gip me.. ROAR..